I thoroughly enjoyed the premise and the story… can’t wait to discover what is behind the real world issues. Usually i find the real-world storyline to be a distraction from the “real story” in the game world, however the writer doesn’t spend an inordinate amount of time out of the Game, which is the reason that I enjoy this genre to begin with. So i’m able to follow both storylines without that feeling of being taken out of the emersion, if you get what i mean.
Great job, can’t wait for book 2… about to read it on amazon right now.