It’s a fun read despite my qualms about some of the writers style. When editing he should really try to limit the recycling of phrases. If I had a beer for every time he used some version of “you mean you don’t know??” I’d have been blasted by the end of the book. Also, he uses a framework of Alpha hierarchy to the wolf faction. That is a concept from earth so idk why a fantasy world would use the same nomenclature but aside from that it’s a false theory of how wolf packs work. They DON’T have ALPHAS. That was a theory debunked by the same dude that penned it. They operate as a communal society.
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