I like the characters and the relationships between them. I love all the action. And what a cliffhanger!
I have only one complaint to the author. Please don’t use medical diagnoses if you aren’t read up on what they actually mean. Daniel’s father does not display any symptoms that should lead anyone to assume he has bipolar disorder. He seems to have lost contact with reality, which may occur in bipolar patients some times, but may also happen in a number of other mental illnesses. Please don’t continue the popular idea of bipolar patients as “the classic crazy person”. Thank you.