Most of this story was either written poorly, doesn’t make sense or is unbelievable. I mean the world starts falling apart the first day of the EMP strike? The main character wakes up from sleep and immediately knows there’s been an EMP strike, not to mention she’s already fully prepared with supplies? People are starving to death after only two days?
The characters don’t have any real personality and you don’t feel connected to them, not to mention dialogue is not very good most of the time.
The first half of the story was the most interesting, but after the midway point it started to go even more downhill. I barely finished it.