Every character was an extreme version of an archetype which made them boring and in some cases incorrect. Decent job building up story B antagonist but story A and story B took too long to merge, only doing so right at the end and with dissatisfying results. Felt like the last few pages were rushed.
Narrator has an interesting voice but not much range in accents or gender distinctions. First type I listened to this narrator so it could have been direction issue rather than skill.