I got bored of the condescending beta kid whining about everything while the story goes no where. Additional negative points for having the white knight trope where the MC has a fit over hitting woman. A woman who is superpowered and trying to kill him. Long sections of nothing happening might work if the book is 20+ hours this is 7 hours long with 6 hours of it being beta millennial with severe anxiety doing nothing other than talk about TV shows and being an author
