Suspension of disbelief can only get me so far and since the main conflict made little sense to me (in real life, I believe they would have sent the crew to another site before paying them weeks of partial wages) I had trouble getting into it. I would have liked the narrator to have more variation between the two main characters in dialogue. He started with a distinct accent for one of the characters that came and went and I would lose track of who was speaking. Besides a lot of other little things that added up and bugged me, it was a cute story with a happy ending.