Could have been great

This was a convoluted story to me. I had a difficult time getting into the book. The main story was further into the book and chapters fluctuated between present, past, dreams and reality. Overall the story is based on good ideas but could have been edited to be more concise. The narration was performed by the author and is acceptable. I think the story would have been enhanced by an actor or professional narrator but as I said, the author did an acceptable job.

I received this audiobook at my request and I provided this voluntary review.