Book is actually really done well, ghost is annoying at times with his constant pushing, to the point the narrative is really about him. I am looking forward to the next book.
Now to the narration, love sound booth but they really drive you nuts with the internal back and forth talking. Hump or something like that whenever they switch characters. We get it we can tell who is who and how they are talking. I had to take breaks at time due to that break in immersion every time they said it. Distracts from the story and I’m sure 20 mins of the book is that one freaking word.
If it’s the author then Harmon please do it once and then let them talk.
Other than that maybe some more about the MC and his wants. Ghost is an idiot at times for how experienced he is suppose to be.
Book is worth the credit