I think I did not realize that this was a children’s story when I picked it up. I think the best audience might be very young elementary school children. But if this was actually meant to be for adults then it is a terrible story, badly written. I must honestly say the only reason I finished this story was because it was so short. The main villain is a cartoon character virtually. Things happen for no apparent reason. I honestly felt that I was reading something done by some eight-year-old. There’s no way I can take the time to list all of the inconsistencies and stupid aspects of the story. And my last annoyance is this is not a litRPG story.