The main character is very unlikeable, and uninteresting.

The women in this book are inexplicably attracted to the main character, and have zero character development outside of their interactions with him.

ALL of the jokes are forced, and the sexual innuendo was done so poorly that I found it tasteless and physically cringed at times.

The whole book is just a self-serving fantasy for the author, which is fine, but I would not recommend this book to anyone who is truly into LITRpg and adjacent genres. It reads like the wanna-be version of He Who Fights With Monsters, but with half the talent, wit, humor, and vocabulary.

The soundtrack and audio effects are far overdone and make the book difficult to hear at times- why would you muffle voices that require the use to turn up the volume, then put in crazy loud crashing noises right after?

If this were an amateur podcast, I’d be a bit more understanding.