First, the narration is fantastic. 5 stars for Jeff. That said… Oof. I’ve listened to over 50 lit rpg books by this point. This was frustrating because it had the potential to be great, but the writer is cringe immature. I don’t know anything about the author, but if they’re anything over the age of 20, this is embarrassing. I don’t need to know about the size of literally every female character’s cleavage. I actually rooted for the main character to get tortured when it happened, because he is so badly written.