Compared to another litrpg this one is less stale, stagnate, and manages to carry the momentum from book to book. I didn’t notice big plot holes and the plot armor is not super obvious. I just wish there was more exposition on the subplots. Near the end, it was hard to remember some of the names of the characters.

The narration was fantastic. Just some were hard to understand, but it didn’t ruin the narrative.

My favorite is the screaming goat. That made me laugh out loud.

DAMMIT DONUT