There’s not enough character development imo. There’s this description of the girl that seems straight out of a cheesy romance novel. And then within days the hot girl is throwing herself at the protagonist and asking him if he has room in his life for love. They just met, for crying out loud. The dialogue was really awkward and had me cringing. I wish the author had just stuck with the adventure part. THAT was interesting and written pretty good. I’ve started this book twice but I can’t. I’ll just return it. I’m kind of bummed because I LOVE action adventure
The narrator was a bit slow but I adjusted it the narration speed to 1.4 and it was fine.