Pretty bad. Couldn’t get thru the first 20 min. Reading was ok it is just written with little experience. An amateur with talent. Too wordy.. Adding words where the imagination could have made a connection instead. Everything has detail. Not everything needs a detailed summary of its existence. Ie.. The tent pole was strong. It came from a place in the forest where the sun and water. Yada yada yada. As in who cares. Some detail is just not needed. Stephen king said adding word count for no reason can torpedo a story.. Charlotte joko beck said. Elegance is refusal. Which applies to literature as much as to any other topic. The empty spaces balanced against the discription of the backdrop and characters is a fine line.. A line that is not present here. I look forward to works by this author in the years to come.