Should have been twice as long to develop characters back stories and their relationship, especially with the many additional characters introduced as the first book in a series. It was forced, both MCs wimpy & whiny. Female MC cannot be called a heroine. So many character inconsistencies. Details rape/mutilation/perversions of villain which given the length of the book was wasted time and was disgusting.
I think this was an attempt to do something similar to Cindy Gerard, Maya Banks, or similar, but ends up no where near.
Cringy. Just don’t.