Too formulaic for me. I am big fan of the genere and Kevin Pierce but this story is just to by the numbers for me. The heros are entirley too idealized and all the other characters are just cookie cutter. Plot twists and surprises are rare and seen from a mile away. The narrartion is what makes you in anyway involved with the story. There is a great story here but it just wasn’t found in this writing
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