Superb story telling, interesting timeline and character jumps that lay the entire story out in almost a closing-argument summary. I’m originally from most/all the areas discussed, having physically been in several of the places mentioned, and I find no flaws in Jack’s scene-descriptions; only flaws were pronunciation of a few locales: “L ow ville” (like “ouch”, not like “low”), “Oss wee go” (not “Os wi go”), and “Pull ass sky” (not “Pull as ski”). I thoroughly enjoyed listening to a tough story that didn’t get so graphic I’d be embarrassed if someone overheard.