This felt like a novel with a decent story, but horribly needing am editorial team. Conversations were repetitive and cliche. “Shocking” moments were entirely predictable. Maddox is dangerously leaning towards Jonny Sue territory. Blatantly obvious tactics and strategy were ignored.
Oh and my favorite part is that I’ve now learned how to get a women. Act professional when we first meet, but then increasingly sexually harass and ignore her refusals. Then finally hug and kiss her against her will and she will melt into your arms.