The over story and everything I like. Kobe is really confusing and it’s annoying when she gets mad at Joe. the most independent radical feminist woman would have been understanding to the situation of Joe being precocious. It was a very odd moment but I guess the author needed a way to set up future events. My main issue is the performance, sometimes for example a person will be getting shot and dying yet when they respond to the person that shoots them it sounds like they’re excited in a good way not in a terrible scared way. This happens over and over and it’s hard to derive context and see it cinematically in your head.