1) Narrator is fantastic, but there is only so much she can do with such sloppy writing.
2) the combat scenes are so ridiculous that I simply cannot suspend my disbelief. It was the scene behind Sky’s house with Mikayla that was the last straw.
3) The main character is simply too inconsistent with just about every thing she does or says.
4) there is no transition to most scenes. No transition between when one character speaks at the end of one scene with no clear ending, and the next when a different character speaks. Or when the characters move from one location to the next with no warning. The narration begins again with no hint about what is going on, who is talking, or where they are. There is a whole lot of guess work needed by the reader. This left me confused and frustrated.