I love your writing. Your style, characters, unique ideas, careful plot development, and through editing make for wonderful reads. Unfortunately, I was frustrated in this book by the use of a low level plot development tool. To have Finn switch maturity levels to that of Jason or Riley merely to advance the plot was irksome. While I figure this review isn’t typically seen by the author I would lightly suggest, if he ever were to read this, a re-affirmation to hold to proper character development and character behavioral consistency as a means of uplifting the great quality of your books to that of truly excellent. I realize this is a small matter and truthfully I still really enjoy all of your writings and greatly look forward to further installments.
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