There were times when it was confusing keeping track of which was talking, with one narrator covering sometimes multiple people in a rapid conversation, especially towards the end.
The story itself was interesting. Twin brothers – one gay and out and the other living life as straight but pretty sure he’s bi.
Having to pretend to be his brother to break up with exes is a little thin, except to set the main plot device – where he wasn’t supposed to pretend but does. There are a lot of little things in the story where it’s better if you just don’t analyze them too closely and go along for the ride. If you do that, you’ll enjoy the story.