The story could use another review/edit. People know too much too fast to be believable. Minor spoiler of an example here but if the main character and his group go into a dungeon that is at least 4 hours from town and everyone else is wiped out in about 40 minutes, there is no way for folks back at town to find out, put out a bounty, and get the bounty hunters to the dungeon for revenge in under an hour. Why would they even know the group was dead? Yet two different families find out and put out bounties.
This is just an example of the same problem that keeps reoccurring. People know things the author has clearly worked out in his head but given no reason for the reader to understand why this is possible. Yet at the same time spending exorbitant amounts of time discussing game mechanics as the character goes shopping.
There is probably a good story here but it needs a lot of tightening up to get there.