The story seemed to be fairly solid until the MC started talking about guys being hot. It completely shut me down from the rest of the story and made me disinterested. A disclaimer of some kind should be in the intro to let people know that the relationships are unconventional. I don’t wanna hear about sex or sexual orientation for the most part in fantasy but something normal is alright. If I wanna read things about gay shit I’d rather see it laid out specifically to warn readers instead of assuming everyone is chill with it.