To the author…I suspect your audience are both women and gay men, but hardly any of the women and gay men I know like to play sports, let alone watch them, or hear several audio books with content about sports. All of the gay men I know despise sports, have trauma from their past inflicted by sports obsessed jocks, and were even taunted by the girls who played sports. So, does the majority of your audience really connect with that content? Do they find it believable that construction workers, fireman, and police defectives are gay? Of course it happens, but I feel like the characters are pulled directly from some primetime TV show and were lazily rewritten to be gay. And OH MY GOD, most gay guys do not go all squishy over babies, don’t want to adopt, and don’t want to spend hundreds of thousands of dollars to custom order one. Perhaps these characters who have manly jobs and are all gushy for babies are completely attractive to heterosexual women, but come on…these are gay characters, of which gay men should relate to. Beyond these very predominant flaws made by most female gay romance authors, I think you have excellent story development and I like what you do. I love the narrator Joel Leslie, as always. I think Blissville is a great place and I wish it existed. It’s just impossible to imagine a gay haven in rural Ohio with a bunch of macho sensitive daddies setting up house with their babies.