I really don’t get the reviews saying this was suspenseful or plot twisting. Two characters’ involvement was obviously from the start. In my opinion the reviews stating that the main character was immature and whinny had more to do with the narrator’s voice choice and tone. The voice of the brother was not consistent either. As for the book dragging- I feel that was also largely due to the narration. Speeding up the pace to 1.15 helped the tone and pace… still whinny – but didn’t make the main character seem as much like a little girl. I really like this author, so I am going to give the next book in the series a try… hopefully the narrator improves with practice, she seems young and inexperienced.