Slight spoiler warning!
Honestly adult themes (sexual encounters/nudity) always feel awkward and distract to heavily from the main story most of the time. This story is no different. It feels very out of place for what is suppose to be high elven society, I can understand certain scenarios where it can work. But it’s extremely hard to hit right. Overall the scenes were far to jaring even if they were short.
A warning would be appreciated in description.
Story is very solid though, and the idea and world building are pretty good! Narration wasn’t bad either