Very compelling story.

This story is different from the rest. The characters are better drawn, the story dwells on the internal conflicts between people more than external conflicts.
The five minutes of kidnapping adds nothing to the story and was not needed as the resolution of the story was not delayed nor affected by the effort.
The only negatives in an otherwise very good narration were the moans, yelps, gasps or other non verbal exclamations. They were awful and silly and broke the mood presented by the author’s otherwise effective love scenes.