I did like the overall story but all of it unfolded too slowly. Repetition is my pet peeve. It’s so unnecessary. I feel it insults the listener/reader like they somehow didn’t get it the first 10-15 times. If it’s absolutely necessary then rephrasing or reframing absolutely should be done. With that being said I was interested enough to not DNF which I normally would do. I liked the character development. I loved the scheming. Uncovering the why’s added a bit of intensity. Emotions definitely came across.
Narration was really good for most of it. Anna’s voice was excellently conveyed in emotional range as well as inner voice. Georgia was at times hit or miss. It may have been the author’s plan to have her come across as submissive and timid but it sounded weak, which Georgia clearly is not. Several times Millie’s voice really was off. I think if it doesn’t sound masterful then the narrators own voice is such a better sound.