Amusing, but ham fisted and in need of an editor.

Show, Don’t Tell. The world of ludus is interesting, but the characters all feel oddly immature for their reported ages and experience. Character background comes from heavy handed internal monologues that often feel out of place. The audio production is good, though they added an odd and quickly annoying echo effect to go with the characters inner thoughts. I made it to the end, but may not bother with the next one.