1/3 way through 1st story and it seemed like a circle of lock her up, she complains, lock her up… story keeps going in circles. the supposed tension building of the story isn’t told in the story, it is done by keeping things from the FMC (keep her igborant and in the dark) and she doesn’t have enough persobality to rebel back and find answes on her own. The story isn’t skilled in STORYTELLING. all the guys are jerks.
Narrator does a good job, I just couldn’t keep going.