I liked the idea, but the execution wasn’t great. The female narrator sounded angry and stiff the whole time. Then again, the FMC was pretty negative.
The whole story was VERY repetitive. The MCs questioning their own motives and feelings chapter after chapter. Some LOL moments but I skipped 12 chapters to get to the climax and then to the final two chapters and missed absolutely nothing.
Ok for a freebie. Otherwise spend your credit elsewhere