First off, congratulations to the author for accomplishing his dream and being published. That said, he has a long way to go before achieving any level of satisfactory entertainment. The author is way too fond of adverbs and apparently is under the illusion that regurgitating the same information over and over is good storytelling. The book really was painful to get through which is unfortunate because the storyline could have been entertaining. The narrator did not help the story either, there was very little dimension in his tone and it doesn’t take long before it starts to great on your nerves.