As one of the Audible Plus library, I was happy with this story, but won’t listen to the second book until it goes on sale or to Audible Plus. It was a good story and decent narration. If a good editor had streamlined the story to get rid of some of the slow and awkward parts, it would have been better. The story idea was good and the parts that were good were enjoyable. I would HEAVILY recommend that the stat sheet reading be minimized the the length of the shat sheet info be reduced. For narration, maybe picking up the pace a bit and putting a bit more emotion into the parts where it’s needed would help. A decent narration job, but nothing to set the narrator apart or have me digging to see what other books he has narrated.