unless they were paid, or maybe Lit beta readers leaving them.

This started to be the continuation of Zee Locked in, that I had been waiting on. Then chapter 3 or 4 arrived and the story started spinning out.

After that it was glimpses of maybe the writer is going to pull this back to progress the storyline, just to spin out again on a different side story. As if to broaden the volume options as if this was book 1.

Sadly as so many of the LitRPG seem to do, This book is to spring board the money train of endless sequels.

After this book ended, I felt as if the story had only advanced by a couple chapters.

Clearly this could have been titled. Let me introduce you to all the friends Zee will meet over the next 8 books.

I can’t say I am waiting on the next book. Maybe if it finds its way to the free section, and I’m not following an engaging writer.