I’m not sure why I made it to book 3. I should have stopped at 1. I like the author and love the narrator but this story was so bad. The character development is non existent. The plot is weak. The world building was a huge miss.
The hardest part for me was hating the MC/narrator character. He’s weak, self centered, stupid beyond all understanding, whiny, refuses to listen to anyone friend or foe. It’s hard to connect to a story when you hate the MC that much.
There were some spots where the writing got so bad I just fast forwarded past it. Entire paragraphs spent foreshadowing the very next statement. ‘What he told me next rocked me to my core and devoured everything in my soul, “Pickles.” (I made that line up but it really is that bad) Such a weak plot didn’t need that much foreshadowing- it needed a shredder and a match.