It was an enjoyable listen, and started off in a way I don’t typicality find in most books of this kind.
Story-wise, it was a fun and I am looking forward to seeing how the MC developes going forward with the hoard of women around him. I do think things could have been expanded a bit though. Characters lamenting the number of times they had to attempt something before finding a method that worked, or maybe the MC expressing more of his hesitation.
Narration was good in my opinion, but I think that if this had been dual narrated Steve could have been more expressive in his style.