The author can’t seem to be able to tell the reader what is happening in smooth succinct language. Maybe he is still stunk in college trying to reach the word count requirement of his English 102 professor. When explaining how a character thinks, feels or otherwise experiences the world around him the author strings together adjectives and phrases telling the reader it was, "like this, like than, like something more and like something more than that and then like something else and like, like, like, like…" Like, can I have my money back? I’ll be happy to delete this book from my device and my memory!
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