I loved the story, the female narrator was great. I am sorry to say, that Michael Pierces voice is grating! If he would just talk normal he would be ok but has a very annoying sounding voice at the end of a sentence during emotional times that just… uggghhhhh! He’s also the male voice for several other Bella J books and I don’t think I will purchase them. the only reason I did get book 2 is because I want to know what happens. He just makes me cringe when he sounds that way. it’s almost nasally and whiney. Otherwise Bella, I love your story and might just get the kindle version. Please consider using someone else for the male parts of your books, Troy Duran, Sebastian York, Jonathan McClain to name a few