There are moments when the MC is reviewing details of choices he needs to make in the game that are easy to zone out during. Once the MC makes a decision based on the numerous prompts, the author doesn’t repeat the selection he made, which makes it hard to know what he picked – but that is a common issue with audiobooks versus reading them as text.
Otherwise, the story is pretty good. The world building and plot development is solid, and the character development is decent. I am curious to see where he goes with this in the next books.