Good progress… a lot of plot holes that I am sure will never be fixed. Gets kinda kinky, not really a fan, but it isn’t a huge part.

Still too many side characters. I wish Zack would be killed off already. The author writes him as a self-absorbed hypocrite that is a bleeding heart. Yet he keeps him around and even gives him the spotlight. I got to the point that any chapter with him I would just skip. He has nothing of value to the story.