love the story and plot but the ending was about half a book to short. the majority of the book was about 1 book too long. if I had to guess the author started this book and figured it would be a 2 part book finale but ran out of time and wrapped it all up quick. I wish there was more character development, less constant exposition in every chapter by every character and what was up with Charlie being lame at the end? I get wanting to make room for the others but he could have done a bit more.