Werewolf Stiles Stilinski meets Human Derek Hale. They were fated from the beginning and everything is awful.
This is the worst fanfiction Ive ever read, and admittedly Ive read a lot.
In the beginning the main characters are 10 and 16 but they act like a 5 and 9 year old respectively. In one instance Joe (10) is described as ‘climbing’ over Ox’s (16) head and being carried up the road was super weird and so unrealistic that I immediately came out of the story.
The voice actor uses the same voice for 12yo Ox up until hes in his twenties and the same with Joe, which is uncomfortable as a 17yo who sounds like a 10yo is trying to seduce a 23yo. I understand the idea behind it, keeping their voices the same to show when they really become men but it wouldve been better to just get another voice actor.
The repetition annoying and misused. I get that this kind of repetition is commonplace in wolf stories to show the singularity of thought but there were strings of HE SAID ‘blah blah’ HE SAID ‘blah’ that were unwarranted.
The dialogue was cringe- one of the last spoken lines is ‘how dare you die in front of me’
The sex scenes and SA references were so graphic and completely out of left field that I felt gross.
That this has so many 5star reviews is beyond me as I only finished this through herculean power of well and the little enjoyment I had hate listening.