At times it didn’t make sense, the FL tried to be “strong/independent “ but came off dumb and suicidal. Thrust into a world filled with magic and supernaturals and she, a mortal acts like she has a leg to stand on. at times it was very annoying. The romance or attraction is all of a sudden THERE, a lot of big words used for no reason. it was all very spotty. i liked the idea of it more than the actual book.