If you don’t mind the obvious male power fantasy, lack of story direction, lack of character development, and unrealistic character behavior…this story is like fast food: doesn’t taste too bad as long as you don’t pay too much attention to the ingredients.
The constant reading of all of the stats on everyone’s “character sheet” over and over and over again was painful to.
Overall, a very unique concept. In its current form, this would make a better TV show than book.