A lot of shouting in the narration and some of the classic pitfalls of litRPG with MC supposedly being smart but also acting like a 10yr old on a sugar rush. Having a character with a high INT means you have to make an effort to write him acting accordingly, it is very common in litRPG and probably hard to handle when you give hard numbers for your main characters abilities, so it becomes more obvious when your MC deviates from the established norm. Suspension of disbelief is easier when you don’t get a stat sheet recited at you every few hours. IMO great universe building but still some pieces missing in the story.