Overall: fun, goofy but too short and a little too much harem fantasy coming back to the forefront.
Good: Fun fight scenes, decent characterization of some of the side characters and moderate plot advancement.
Bad: Overall too short and side characters get too much page time. Give us more Jason and Henry, with maybe a single glimpse of the others. Save side characters for separate series.
I also don’t care for the sister wives Mormonesque story arc.
Finally this was notably missing anything about advancement which is weird for something that bills itself as litrpg