The first 6 chapters were great but dropped in quality from chapter 35 on. Jackie and some of the other characters came across as generic and unlikable. Some of the dialouge was god awful and unnatural. Also, if guns are going to be essential to the characters, do some research. Its not a clip, its a magazine. Glocks don’t have safetys to “flip off”. Ally was great, so was Kim. They had a great arc that kept me reading.