As the title says; this was a pretty good effort. Some of the downsides in my opinion: the noob is the leader of the party? That’s not very realistic. There are many grammatical errors: the writer seems to not know that the past tense of “to sink“ is “sink“ not “sunk.“ I also noticed that the writer rarely if ever uses adverbs. What is a “rear haunch”? According to Wikipedia, a hunch is a hip so it’s automatically the rear leg. They were many other errors in this vein, but I couldn’t keep track of them all. Also for me, do we have to go through allocating points at every level up? Five minutes of every chapter are wasted by telling us where he puts his points and his new skills. I understand that’s how MMORPGs are played, but every level?! I’m not sure if I’ll read the next in the series if they’re even is one